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Last Moment With Dashie by BlackGryph0n Last Moment With Dashie by BlackGryph0n
"I'll miss you, Daddy..."

Based on the Fan Fic My Little Dashie by :iconrobcakeran53:

If you have not read this fan fic yet, you must... YOU MUST... YOU MUST!!!
It is honestly one of the best short stories I have ever read, and I have read a few! For those of you who haven't read it though, here's the premise so that you may better understand this image:
Warning: SPOILER
Rainbow dash is found as a filly by a man who lives alone in the house his parents left him after they passed away. Over the course of several years, he raises her as a daughter, never knowing where she came from or how she got there. With the help of her adopted father, Rainbow Dash grows to become the mare we all know. They go through some hard times, they have some fights, yet through it all, their relationship grows ever stronger. On a summer day of the fifteenth year, Princess Celestia and the other five show up at his house to bring Rainbow Dash home with them, explaining that an accident had sent her to our world only a few equestrian days earlier. The final moments between Rainbow Dash and her adopted Dad are some of the saddest words I have ever read. Before twilight erases Dashie's memories of our world and takes her back to Equestria, Dash writes this letter:

Dad,

For fifteen years you took care of me. For fifteen years you loved me, played with me, and made sure I enjoyed my life in a world not meant to house me. I'm not a mare of many words, but even though I told you this in person, I felt you needed a written version of it so you will know it was all real.

I love you daddy. You helped shape me into the mare I am now. I'm not sure what is going to happen, if I will remember any of this or not, but I want you to know that you did a darn good job of raising me, even if I was a bit stubborn at times and short with you during others.

With Celestia's permission, I hope to allow you to keep our photos; our memories, with you so that you will never forget. Again, I love you, and thank you.

Your little daughter always,
Your little Dashie forever,
Rainbow Dash.


So everypony, if you haven't read it yet, please, for me, READ IT!! You may cry a little, but you won't regret it, I promise you.

THIS PIC IS DEDICATED TO :iconcaerdwyn: WHO GAVE ME A YEAR LONG PREMIUM MEMBERSHIP!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! :tighthug:


:iconmlpfimplz: :iconhasbroplz: & :iconfyre-flye:
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Critique by BronyEternal42 Jan 18, 2012, 4:10:06 PM
Well done. It's hard to put cartoons into real life without it looking cheesy (Looney Tunes: Back in Action, we're looking at you). However, you've done it quite well.

I was pretty much sick of hearing about My Little Dashie, but this brought back some of the emotions I felt when I first read it, a feat which is not common, since I'm an emotionally withdrawn person, usually. I'm willing to admit that I'm crying right now, even as I type this. Thank you for that (no sarcasm intended.)

Well done. I hope to see more such works from you in the future.
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The piece as a whole is absolutely heart wrenching. This is honestly one of the most beautiful pieces of art I have ever seen, and not just amongst the Friendship Is Magic category. The detail on Dash is incredible, right down to the tears on and just beneath her eyes. It must have been quite difficult to mesh the image of Dash with her "Daddie" as seen in the picture, but you've pulled it off masterfully. When I first saw this image, it had me in floods of tears, and I can feel them welling up once more as I type this. Well done.
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:iconlucy-pop:
Lucy-Pop Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2016
so cool
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:iconseanguy4:
Seanguy4 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Excellent!
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:iconfishofglass:
fishofglass Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2016
so good!
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:icondoforfree:
DoForFree Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, you need to be special kind of lonely to do this 
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:iconkknkbaker:
kknkbaker Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I-  I'M GONNA CRY!!!
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:(
This story ALWAYS makes me cry!
If someone puts up a picture of little Dashie or Dashie in a box, I cry. :(
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:iconseaessence:
SeaEssence Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
tfw cringe
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:iconpoofles-p-tanner:
Poofles-P-Tanner Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015
Gaaaah i love that fanfic!
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:iconwolfywoods-17:
WolfyWoods-17 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015
Soo sad Sad Fluttershy Sad Fluttershy Sad Fluttershy Sad Fluttershy Sad Fluttershy 
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:iconfloridianfox:
FloridianFox Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2015
This is amazing! I've never read the fanfic, but i have heard of it and I would be happy to read it :3
Also, how did you do this? Putting your art like in the real world?
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:iconbeathazard:
BeatHAZARD Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved this story it made me cry ant the end
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:iconheae:
heae Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
this made me cry, and so did the animation. it made me into a baby.
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S0nicLover Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
i cri everytim
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bbbhyt Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
i saw this once it brought tears in my eyesCry forever Neko Emoji-14 (Cry) [V1] 
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015
"Before twilight erases Dashie's memories of our world"

Why would she do that??
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:iconaguywhocomments:
Aguywhocomments Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2015
I think she means...


NO WITNESSES.
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2015
Oh, I see.
MIB style, heh? But still ... why?
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:iconaguywhocomments:
Aguywhocomments Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2015
Maybe... Twilight wants to be famous for discovering humans. She wants everyone to think she discovered them.
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2015
Hmm ... could be, yeah.
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:iconaguywhocomments:
Aguywhocomments Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2015
But what she didn't realize, was that Rainbow Dash still remembers.
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015
Indeed. :-)
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:iconaguywhocomments:
Aguywhocomments Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015
But Rainbow Dash doesn't say anything about this ever since.
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:iconwitchmiester185:
Witchmiester185 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awwww~:heart:
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:iconejlightning007arts:
EJLightning007arts Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2015  Professional Artist
That is one of the most sadist, and best fan fiction stories I ever saw in my life and I loved it
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AlienSteel23 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
That, really touched my heart, I hope you would do more of those fantastic arts and stories in the future. *sniff* And no, I'm not crying, *sniff* im just sweating through my eyes.
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Witchmiester185 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
There goes that liquid pride. T^T
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:iconfoxyiscool12:
foxyiscool12 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2015
i still find this story upsetting 
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:iconmisstresshero:
misstresshero Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2015
I saw love the movie made cry every time
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:iconkaizo98:
Kaizo98 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Hobbyist
i'm gonna cry. because i'm losing my fate in people by doing this stuff
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:iconmlp-mng:
MLP-MNG Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm pretty sure you mean faith.
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:iconninjagophoenixninja:
NinjagoPhoenixNinja Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2015  Student Digital Artist
we all have our times when we have to say goodbye. My MLP goodbye would go to........Sonata. Though the saddest goodbye I had to give wasn't to a My Little Pony character but from my other favorite animated tv series. The series that everyone ships together because of sameness in voice actors and personalities! NINJAGO! Though MLP has the same amount of seasons (at the current moment.) and has more episodes and more fan art and all that stuff, Ninjago I will say is more heartbreaking. Season 4 and 5 ruined my fanfictions! That's what My Little Pony doesn't do. It makes you happy with its works and it doesn't make you hate it (to most people). That's why I'm thinking MLP is better than Ninjago. Well for fanfictions and videos. Ninjago is more for its.....toys and entertainment. I give MLP: 9 out of 10 Sonic Rainbooms while Ninjago gets 8 Realm Crystals out of 10! GOOOOOO MLP!
Thx to all the people who toke their time into reading this.
~£rika~
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Grassyneptune8 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww... this kinda makes me wanna cry. T_T
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:iconcldyo:
cldyo Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
IT'S TOO SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconm-alachiite:
m-alachiite Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Hey Gryph~!

Im making a game~!
Its an RPG Horror game!
Sorry if my english is bad, Im Czech ^^;

Anyways
I was wondering if you can be a character, 
he's you!
If that makes any sense ^^; 

But Its with ponies and Im a voice actor for myself.
Well, 
I like to voice act...
God my english sucks ^^
Sorry!!!!!

Anyways, 
Could you help?
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MLPDancingQuill Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  Student Artist
I-I'm not crying.. -Sniff.-Chisaki Crying Icon 
-10 minutes later.-
Crying Mako Crying Mako  I CANT HELP IT! ;-;
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ACP-030 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
It's so beautiful. I read this story since on November 3, 2013, midnight. For the first time in my life, I cry like a baby; I've never felt that emotional of my entire life.
Rainbow sad  Rainbow Dash (cry) plz Pinkie pie,rarity and fluttershy (cry) plz Pinkie (Happy tears) Plz 
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MidnightDelecents Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
FUCK! THE FEELZ >0<
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:iconticci-illy-rogers:
Ticci-Illy-Rogers Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
me and mama say it's cool!
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:iconjeremyismybae:
Jeremyismybae Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Student Digital Artist
whwwwwwwwwhwhwhwhwhwhw THE FEELS MAN DX
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atisuto17 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
This scene made cryRainbow Dash (cry) plz 
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:iconnocturnal-sunlight:
Nocturnal-Sunlight Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015
You're right. It hits right in the feels.
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:iconsparkle-wing:
Sparkle-wing Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015  Student Artist
omg i agree 
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:iconbronyno786:
BronyNo786 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're not alone Pikachu Crying Plz 
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:iconi-digapony:
I-DigAPony Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Interesting size. I think the ponies are a little bigger. (but then again I'm 6'3")
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:iconacruxic:
Acruxic Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  Student Filmographer
I have a strong sense you're lonely irl.
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BlackGryph0n Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015
Intuitive, but no. I didn't write the story, I only did the art. ;P
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:iconacruxic:
Acruxic Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015  Student Filmographer
Lame
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:iconblackgryph0n:
BlackGryph0n Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015
Indeed
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:iconadmiraldoenitz:
AdmiralDoenitz Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
MLP kinda drives me nuts, but this is kinda touching. I'll give you credit for that.
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:iconblackgryph0n:
BlackGryph0n Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015
Thank you sir! :salute:
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:iconadmiraldoenitz:
AdmiralDoenitz Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
No problem. :la:
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